Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Square Poems 18: Mosquito Acrostic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Most deaths have been caused by this guy;
Our duty is to figure why.
Sanitation must be the key;
Quickly let's teach humanity.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

Sanitation must be the key; quickly let's teach humanity.....meaningful dear poet. Liked this wonderful poem. Top score!

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wes vogler 14 November 2018

indifferent last line rhyme but otherwise most excellent

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Kim Barney 14 November 2018

Thanks for the comment, old friend. It is most appreciated.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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