Square Poems 18: Mosquito Acrostic Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Square Poems 18: Mosquito Acrostic

Rating: 5.0

Most deaths have been caused by this guy;
Our duty is to figure why.
Sanitation must be the key;
Quickly let's teach humanity.
Unless we do this thing right now,
I think our lives we disavow.
To tolerate this foolishness,
Our future could be in a mess.

Square Poems 18: Mosquito Acrostic
Tuesday, November 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,disease,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Mosquitoes are the cause of more deaths in the world than any other creature. Eliminate any unnecessary pools of standing or stagnant water around your residence. Get inoculated against diseases that are prevalent in your area. Death to mosquitoes, not to humans!

I call these square poems because they have the same number of syllables per line as there are lines in the poem. For example, a four-line poem would have four syllables per line, and a five-line poem would have five syllables per line.

This poem has eight lines, so it has eight syllables per line.

Square poems do not have to rhyme, and they do not have to be acrostics.

To see my other square poems with lower numbers from here, just keep clicking on the 'previous poem' button.

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30 November 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

Sanitation must be the key; quickly let's teach humanity.....meaningful dear poet. Liked this wonderful poem. Top score!

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wes vogler 14 November 2018

indifferent last line rhyme but otherwise most excellent

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Kim Barney 14 November 2018

Thanks for the comment, old friend. It is most appreciated.

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