Squashed Fat Poem by Jenny Kalahar

Squashed Fat

Rating: 4.3


Like a blobfish without soulful eyes
more orange than white, this pumpkin
takes over my garden
its ridges uneven
looking like a gut released from jeans and belt
to relax on dirt at the end of a day
but this pumpkin waits or fears
or has not been warned at all
that knives will slice it open
spilling seeds and orange innards,
a wet mess that seeps like blood into the soil,
hacked flesh chopped into giant bowls
carted off for pies and breads
once fully dead,
and we feel nothing of the horror of it all
this autumnal sacrificial rite
we feel the horror of it not at all

Squashed Fat
Monday, October 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,garden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 12 February 2020

Congratulations on poem of the day! A very different piece of writing. Now many will remember this in October and hesitate to start carving!

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Jenny Kalahar 13 February 2020

Thanks, Kim! It seems an odd choice for PotD in February! - Jenny

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 12 February 2020

Interesting poem with clever choice of words for a seemingly regular Fall activity - autumnal sacrificial rite! Congratulations!

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Jenny Kalahar 13 February 2020

Thank you, Malabika! - Jenny

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Lyn Paul 12 February 2020

Enjoyed reading this delightful poem I now feel like a pumpkin scone. Though cutting pumpkin is not joyous at all.

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Jenny Kalahar 12 February 2020

Thanks, Lyn! - J

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 February 2020

hacked flesh chopped into giant bowls carted off for pies and breads once fully dead, and we feel nothing of the horror of it all really a great poem. tony

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Jenny Kalahar 12 February 2020

Thank you! I appreciate your comments, as always. - Jenny

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2020

Horror! ! Fully dead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jenny Kalahar 12 February 2020

You are welcome and thank you, Edward! - Jenny

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