Stevie Taite

Rookie - 78 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -) - Poem by Stevie Taite

All matter that existence here
constructed of quark?

Everything you need for life
Fits one arc?

A misty graveyard with only
Song of Lark

Raving madness that takes hold
Makes you bark

Cutting bluntness of succinct remark
Stalks like shark

Barron, the searing hot desert
Must not disembark

Broken mind, shades
under depression
So very dark

Winters morn sitting on bench
In empty park

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Think it still works, and it wasn't too tricky to modify and fit a more traditional structure (every day is a school day) x

Comments about Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -) by Stevie Taite

  • Xelam Kan™ (11/3/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    hahahhah did good job
    seems quite strange, isn`t?
    extremely thankful for mentioned me
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  • (11/3/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    how true....but fun to read so no complains about the piece

    thank you for sharing mam
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  • Stevie Taite (11/2/2012 11:55:00 PM)

    Aaaarrrgggg Thomas, that dies not fit the format!

    Waiting with mum at doctors
    Painfully boring afternoon
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  • Robinson (11/2/2012 11:56:00 AM)

    waiting on mom
    in doctors office
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, November 2, 2012

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