Stark Poem by Stevie Taite

Stark

Rating: 5.0


All matter and existence
build from the concept of quark
Stark

Everything you need for life
Fits on one Arc
Stark

A misty graveyard with just
the song of the Lark
Stark

The raving madness that takes hold
and makes you bark
Stark

The cutting bluntness
of a succinct remark
Stark

Barren, the searing desert.
I fight the urge to disembark
Stark

A broken mind, in the shade
of depression, so dark
Stark

A winters morn alone
on a bench in an empty park
Stark

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 28 October 2012

Very meaningful and poignant write Stevie - very good.

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Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

Beautiful write. I love the last stanza most A winters morn alone on a bench in an empty park Stark

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Xelam Kan™ 02 November 2012

the first thing that strick is its schem good one do refine it with diff look like 3 2 1 or 5 3 1 words in each line as m already working on but in vain yo did it well....... grt show

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Kelvin Owusu 01 November 2012

i love the structure of this poem, a well written poem

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John Brown 29 October 2012

Nice poem Stevie, but in the third from last verse, should that be barren (you've typed barron) ?

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Jahan Zeb 29 October 2012

A winters morn alone on a bench in an empty park How is it like? What if not alone? Company matters the most That is a very nice poem. Every part telling a different story. Well done Stevie

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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