Stevie Taite

Rookie - 78 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Drunk And Disorganised - Poem by Stevie Taite

I tried to write a poem
whilst drunk
I thunk and I thunk
which is hard when you're drunk
But all I could thunk
was how bladdered I were
And that probably
all of my stanza would slur

Comments about Drunk And Disorganised by Stevie Taite

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/2/2016 12:10:00 PM)

    you have expressed dramatically in words the feeling and the experience of being drunk...... thank you. very nice poem. you have conveyed what you really wanted to convey. tony (Report) Reply

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  • (4/16/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    Saved to titter over my beer googles Friday Tuvm (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Hahaha. I thunk this is bwilliamce! Lol I've done it so many times. Once had three reviews on a poem I'd never laid eyes on knowingly before. Found you by a poem written in your humour honour I see why now. Karen (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2013 3:52:00 PM)

    If a drink and a think becomes a drunk and a thunk, then I'm sunk! Love it! (Report) Reply

  • (3/5/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    If being drunk means you write something as funny as this, I might give up Al-Anon and join the rest of my family in AA, a very delightful read, candy is dandy but liquor is quicker. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (2/28/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    Dear Stevie, I truly enjoyed this poem. A good belly laugh (I thunk and I thunk) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (2/28/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Dear Stevie, I truly enjoyed this poem. A good belly laugh (I thunk and I thunk) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (2/25/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    I'm sure you have written this poem when organised ! The words- I thunk and I thunk captured me! (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (2/25/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    Hahahahaha. a nice try to call back the conditions and write this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Sandy Player (2/25/2013 8:06:00 AM)

    And they ask me why i live life straight edge... (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (2/25/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    nicely penned.the message is never try to write a poem when we are drunk.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (2/25/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    haha a difficult task to write when you either high or drunk, nice piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 24, 2013

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