Stars Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Stars

Rating: 5.0


To me about you as it counts the stars
and frequently even excessively
mainly there, it is you.
The stars I have known,
have consisted of only one thing,
threes and sevens.
Stars without you,
'That star does not show,
'at all in me-And you look at everything.
When I see, the star dispersed about dawn it sings
of mourning, 'concerning your head.
The star which is you I have not met,
under any condition, therefore as for me,
when I think of that which you spoke concerning you,
however long is the way
and I directly,
'never with you, can I speak of it, 'excessively,
you do not have to appear, yet when you do,
and watching I wait.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 July 2010

‘at all in me-And you look at everything.’…starry affair…wait why… stars alluring you… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Bethany Williams 09 April 2010

You made me smile with this poem. It's a really good poem.

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Marieta Maglas 09 April 2010

nice symbolistic poem, nice metaphorical meaning... 10/10/10

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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