Stars - A Senryu Style Poem Poem by Sandra Martyres

Stars - A Senryu Style Poem

Rating: 5.0


I followed a star
Right to heaven's pearly gates
But I was too late

The star disappeared
Saint Peter had no place for me
I am back on earth

Now if I see stars
I'll gaze at them in the sky
Saint Peter can wait

Monday, March 22, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 26 March 2010

Very evocative. You have many more poetry miles to travel. Love, SandraX

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Iron Panda 23™ 22 March 2010

sounds sparkly :)

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