Strategy (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Strategy (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


Shampoo Strategy
Lather, rinse and then repeat
Works effectively

A simple smile can
Win the hearts of one and all
No reason to frown

Culprits must beware
The long hand of the law can
Reach them anywhere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 August 2009

fine senryu's sandra...the last one not very relevent in india...here th laws hands have shaken hands with culprits

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Catrina Heart 13 August 2009

Fantastic senryu......I loved your first stanza most...10+++

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Me too! I liked the second one best, but they all had your strategy philosophy. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Priyanka Bhowmick 13 August 2009

nice collection of senryus.. i liked the 2nd one the most....

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Ted M 13 August 2009

Shampoo strategy - Then lot of money wasted, (when young) now lot of hair wasted down the drain Simple smile - Smiled at the beautiful lady next door, saw an instant frown appear on her face Culprits beware - Long hand of the law can reach you, that's it! Do I see a frown on your face. Smile, this is a nice one, Was just joking. Nice short write; Only felt as though I was brought back from Disneyland halfway through. Cheers, keep writing.10

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Rakesh Bedi 13 August 2009

..... nice senryus, sandra.......

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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2009

good one Sandra- irony and wry humour- good strategy for Senryu Mamta

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