Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,091 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Stars On Top - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

One star may detach from galaxy
Its fate is chosen by almighty
From years since last it takes place
Life never stops with its pace

Year after year passes on
Sometimes victory is on hand
Sometimes defeat is faced
But goal is always chased

No one looks back
As so much is at stake
Life can not wait for result
It is appreciated and well built

So many lives disappear
Yet human beings never fear
It is non stop occurrence
Feel good and avail as chance

Many empires might have been glorious
Many might have proved disastrous
It is reported to us from time to time
Yet we pick little from past time

This year has also come to an end
Same galaxy and people may remain as friend
The earth may brace up for next monsoon
The grain store may be filled soon

Poor may wish for good crops
Season may show no flop
The struggle may go non stop
Years may stand as stars on top


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    welcome Moushumi Khondaker, like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 6:08:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno Happiest New Year! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 6:08:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez Feliz año bendiciones!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    not my kind of thing...

    jonny gogLess than a minute ago
    Didn't really like it. didn't stir up any emotions or make me think. I never like to lines that finish with the same word ~ time. To me, it seemed a lazy choice of words for what is an eager mind.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Good

    David LJL SmallingLess than a minute ago
    Great moral compassion
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/31/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    One star may detach from galaxy (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 31, 2013



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