Sunday, September 7, 2014

Stars Slid Down In Ocean Comments

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Once in a starry lit full moon sky,
I sat at seashore, enjoying the bliss,
Far from here, at the horizon, seen "kiss",
Earth and heaven hugged, stars melted in
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Valsa George 08 September 2014

Sitting on the sea strand, it is a beautiful sight to see the sky kissing the sea in the distant horizon! The scene is beautifully presented!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2014

Beautiful poem. I loved the lines...... inhaled the fragrance of joy; it is in my mind, Ah! Nature; beautiful, sublime and so..so kind, Very true said, Joy lies in our mind. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 September 2014

Very beautifully composed......Aftab........Nature is always beautiful

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 September 2014

I inhaled the fragrance of joy; it is in my mind, Ah! Nature; beautiful, sublime and so..so kind, Beautiful..

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