Stay Closer Dont Go Poem by Ala elouri

Stay Closer Dont Go



Stay closer don’t go you… cause every moment I miss u…..
I think of you and need you.You don’t know how I
Feel about u..its a feeling I never felt but I know
That I live for a reason, I live for you and I love
You…just look in my eyes and ull see that i really love
You.. I wont say I love you neither will you…but u
Should know that I never had a lovely feeling like this before…

You’re my only and im ur only..You know don’t be afraid to
Tell me with ur eyes….. I'll show u with my eyes my love how much it means to you…………………………….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 24 October 2009

You’re my only and im ur only..You know don’t be afraid to Tell me with ur eyes….. I'll show u with my eyes my love how much it means to you……………………………. good piece of writing..inspiring..well done 10/10

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Lynn Glover 10 October 2009

You will learn to write better as you grow to love poetry more. The above poem needs much work and consentrate on rhythem. Good luck and God Bless, Lynn

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Ala elouri

Ala elouri

SanClemente, California
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