Succeeding Is In My Hands Poem by Ala elouri

Succeeding Is In My Hands

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I want to succeed i dont want to lose
I have a fear that i will lose
I close my eyes and I feel that im going to cry
Because i know there's an enemy in disguise
Then i get a sudden relief and know that
I will succeed and get what i believe...
Will be in my hands tonight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 10 October 2009

The fear of losing is always present with all of us. Good Write. Lynn

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

The voice finally finds strength in her, by realising she will succeed and get what she believes will be in her hands tonight. Adorable.

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Amira Faidi 24 September 2009

VERY BEAUTIFUL :) . GOOD WORK MISS ALA.

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Ala elouri

Ala elouri

SanClemente, California
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