Ala elouri

Succeeding Is In My Hands

I want to succeed i dont want to lose
I have a fear that i will lose
I close my eyes and I feel that im going to cry
Because i know there's an enemy in disguise
Then i get a sudden relief and know that
I will succeed and get what i believe...
Will be in my hands tonight.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 23, 2009

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  • Lynn Glover (10/10/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    The fear of losing is always present with all of us. Good Write. Lynn

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/7/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    The voice finally finds strength in her, by realising she will succeed and get what she believes will be in her hands tonight. Adorable.

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  • Amira Faidi (9/24/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    VERY BEAUTIFUL :) . GOOD WORK MISS ALA.

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