Steal A Summer Poem by Anne Yun

Steal A Summer

Rating: 4.5


A fireworm pass by
Come after a dragonfly
And childlike i

Wednesday, June 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it's summer again
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ludolf Dauphin 16 March 2018

Beautiful Haiku.. the image is quite lovely

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Christopher Tye 04 April 2017

Beautiful poem in keeping with the best Haiku traditions.

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Daniel Brick 22 August 2016

I notice you use the lower case i - so did the American poet e.e.cummings (yes, his signature too was in lower case!) . In your usage I think it means you want to enhance THE OTHER who haunts your poems. Even when you are alone in nature, you enhance the humble creatures who are giving you an early lesson in appreciation of all life. And there is a palpable joy in summer you convey with all its immediacy,

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Anne Yun 22 August 2016

For a child, a little flower, a bird, a dragonfly or a thundering sky can be their endless joy of life. We human once were all nature's child, but now, only few remains.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 June 2016

wings wide spread fly up and sown waited to stay but unstopped

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