Kay Barcelon

Rookie - 20 Points (December / Manila Philippines)

* Stealing A Kiss * - Poem by Kay Barcelon

I like to watch you sleep
Sometimes you sigh
It makes my heart leap

your mouth slightly open
I can’t resist touching your lips
Its softness gets me smitten

My lips moistened
I lean over to steal a kiss
Once again I was summoned

I get so close to your face
you are amazingly beautiful
I feel my heart starting to race

Feeling your warm breathing
Bringing a fever to my whole body
A tenderness I am yearning

Suddenly you awakened
Smiling like I was expected
And the rest is what I have envisioned

Comments about * Stealing A Kiss * by Kay Barcelon

  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/27/2008 9:03:00 AM)

    You write a beautifully romantic poem with a real sense of the wonder of love. I also personally love seeing the word smitten in a poem, we need to use that luscious word more often. (Report)Reply

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  • Wind Ansea (9/28/2006 6:01:00 PM)

    Definitely more preferable than waking up in the basement, being whacked by bamboo sticks while suspended by your ankles.: O) Seriously, nice work! (Report)Reply

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  • Nestor Sbariggi (9/28/2006 7:27:00 AM)

    Kay readign your poem more than the romantic sense that it has I feel a taste of harmony. It's about how life can be beautiful too. 'One thing we share it's an ideal of beauty' says an old song. and that's what I feel about it. (Report)Reply

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  • Prasanna Kumari (9/27/2006 10:59:00 PM)

    your words have the power to create the scene for the reader.i really felt that gentle touch of love.depecting love in a different way is most welcome...keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Séamus Fox (9/27/2006 8:39:00 PM)

    Very beautiful Kay I almost pictured the whole scene, though the characters were different the out come was the same! !


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 25, 2010

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