I like to watch you sleep
Sometimes you sigh
It makes my heart leap
your mouth slightly open
I can’t resist touching your lips
Its softness gets me smitten
My lips moistened
I lean over to steal a kiss
Once again I was summoned
I get so close to your face
you are amazingly beautiful
I feel my heart starting to race
Feeling your warm breathing
Bringing a fever to my whole body
A tenderness I am yearning
Suddenly you awakened
Smiling like I was expected
And the rest is what I have envisioned
Definitely more preferable than waking up in the basement, being whacked by bamboo sticks while suspended by your ankles.: O) Seriously, nice work!
Kay readign your poem more than the romantic sense that it has I feel a taste of harmony. It's about how life can be beautiful too. 'One thing we share it's an ideal of beauty' says an old song. and that's what I feel about it.
your words have the power to create the scene for the reader.i really felt that gentle touch of love.depecting love in a different way is most welcome...keep writing
Very beautiful Kay I almost pictured the whole scene, though the characters were different the out come was the same! ! Séamus
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You write a beautifully romantic poem with a real sense of the wonder of love. I also personally love seeing the word smitten in a poem, we need to use that luscious word more often.