Step By Step Poem by aung si myanmar

Step By Step

Rating: 4.2


Across the sea,
I am sailing
With the soul
Afraid of dying,
Wanna keep for living
to see you.

Across the sky,
I am flying
With the pride
Afraid of losing,
Wanna keep for winning
to be near you.

In the brain,
I am running
With the thoughts
Afraid of stopping,
Wanna keep for creating
To be worth you.

In the will,
I am wishing
With the heart
Afraid of breaking,
Wanna keep for dreaming
To be with you.
To come true!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deep Mukherjee 18 October 2012

the poem has a flow about it.....nice.....

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 October 2012

Very loving and passionate, Aung si. Nice romantic touches in the lines. Keep on posting!

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Eindaray Kyaw 17 August 2012

I like it, although this is a love poem, it has really good and smart procedure.Ok.this time, i won't tell you that you wore your heart in your sleeve in writing this poem! .May be the other's one, isn't it?

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