Still.. I Insist To Do So… Poem by Sandhya S.N

Still.. I Insist To Do So…

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I insist …
To batter those
Sharp corners
Of beloved love
Humble and genuine
I know well it might be
Still.. I insist to do so

I insist …
To leave you there
In the field
Alone befuddled
I know well you might be
Still..I insist to do so

I insist ….
To be blind
To see you, to feel you
And isolate you from me
I know well, it might pain
Still..I insist to do


Sandhya
21.07.2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 01 August 2009

a gain a very beautiful lines woven in poem with beautiful ideas.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

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Maitreyee Joshi 29 July 2009

good write.yes, it is sometimes better to quit then carry on with certain relation ships, maybe for the betterment of both.even if it is hard to do.

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Zachary Clark 28 July 2009

Nice restraint against hot and regretting love.

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Arth Desai 27 July 2009

Nice refrain. The last stanza really appealed to me. The 'Still' does the trick for me. Zmiles!

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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