Trust, the vital hunt in life
Relevant and prevalent syllable
A triggering catalyst which stimulate
And Axle life and yank towards
I am behind that great quest
From the tide of my own dawn
It seems mysterious within
The fading shades which intrigue
I hear that words which ripple round
And fear those sights that crippled me
And spar with me and munch me to
A hollow of mere nothingness
I fear, I have lost the trust
And mistrust my existence too
And I murmur it self at heart
The ardent quest that spill my way
How far I can trust you? Dear!
I know it is tough and hard
To reply that rough harsh query
But one finds it clear as light
If he asked it to his own
Dear,
Trust the light you see in sun and
Trust the smile, the flowering blossom
Trust the dews filled with glee
But never, ever trust those hands
Those fetching hands which hug you to
trust is the foundation of life. well thought of poem. nice words beautifull laid. emotional content is high. i love this poem voted10 surya
trust.......... i trust you dear poet friend........... the value of trust is quite large when we live with dagger in the heart!
trust as far as you can dear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Lovely Poem, Clear and point well emphasised. To be trusted is a better Compliment than being loved is a wise saying. When trust is lost everything is lost.
Dear Sandhya, you are right, after a long wait for paasionate love and after some failures a poet will come to know that nature and the creatue of nature are more trust worthy than the emotional humans. Even animals can be trusted for love than humans sometimes. Acoording to Osha this changing romantic love is the real and more colourful. But I dont believe that. Because we always strive for something passionate and at the same time trustworthy. So I feel love guided by reason and understanding (not always demanding but willing to sacrifice) and the expression of emotional bliss whenever possible may be more permenant and trustworthy. You are mostly dealing with the problems of emotions and love. Write and write and become phylosophic. Yuo are a true poet
Dear Sandhya, Please read my poem - 16. Love is – Trust! [On Love a collection of Poems] you may find part of the reply there. Love and Trust should be equal and mutual and How far? Is as far as we walk... till the end. Maybe True Love or Trust its synonym maybe futile in these modern days. Ido not know. Angel
Trust the light you see in sun and Trust the smile, the flowering blossom Trust the dews filled with glee But never, ever trust those hands Those fetching hands which hug you to...trust those which allay fears...pray sincerely for vision to identify...all will bewell...10..great read mine humble submission...prayer....bidding farewell
trust is earned throughout our life, its given for free but so hard to earn....nice poem with fine flow of words...10+++
Trust the light you see in sun and Trust the smile, the flowering blossom Trust the dews filled with glee ...and trust all your poet friends... Sandhya... through your poem, we are seeing different features of trust... we could look from several directions to trust... it is comfort... it is defraud...It is sometimes hugging us to slavery....Jaleel
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a poem indeed gives message is more worthy......... a good message from you sandhya.........