I Too Need You … Poem by Sandhya S.N

I Too Need You …

Rating: 4.6


What happened to you dear?
To stroll away from me with fear! !
Can’t U see me standing near?
With love U always longed for ever!

I feel rejected in the scene;
And felt that ardent quest in mind;
Why and how it happened so?
To leave me alone and alone! ! !

I wept at heart and woke at night;
And arbitrated more at mind;
Even then I could not find;
A bit of ease to live with fate;

I realize that fizzling pain;
The pain of being desolate!
And it ache me in and out! !
To dispel me from this present!

My legs are feeble and fragile;
To think of even tread a while!
No calliper will make me stride!
Than your candid lovely smile! !

I expect that glitter of love!
More in life to live my life!
So as always you know well! !
That, I too need You in this life! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2009

Good poem...brings out the turmoil inside mind boisterously well...10

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Taiba Zakiah 09 March 2009

thanx..............I like it so much

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Sandra Martyres 09 March 2009

Effectively brings out the emotions and pain of separtion...Good one Sandhya

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anurag duggal 09 March 2009

its a lovely poem sandhya.....u write well

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 March 2009

touching write...successfully brought me into deep thoughts... on the feelings it conveyed to me... the pain...the loss..and the longing... love being expressed vividly.... 10++

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Ted M 09 July 2009

So Beautifully written, Your emotions flow so nicely through your writings.

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rago rago 07 July 2009

emotions flow freely from your heart and find a way in PH...........

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we too need you here sandhya! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice poem loved it given 10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 08 April 2009

beautiful piece, thanks for sharing

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Carl Harris 11 March 2009

Well, punctuation problems and improper use of U for the word you aside, Sandhya, this is a fine poem. When have you ever read a poem in a book that had two or three or more exclamation marks after the last word in a line? And you will not see the word you as U in a book of poetry either. Once you overcome these problems, you have the talent to be a fine poet, for poetic feeling is in your words, not your U's or overabundant exclamation points. Carl.

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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