What happened to you dear?
To stroll away from me with fear! !
Can’t U see me standing near?
With love U always longed for ever!
I feel rejected in the scene;
And felt that ardent quest in mind;
Why and how it happened so?
To leave me alone and alone! ! !
I wept at heart and woke at night;
And arbitrated more at mind;
Even then I could not find;
A bit of ease to live with fate;
I realize that fizzling pain;
The pain of being desolate!
And it ache me in and out! !
To dispel me from this present!
My legs are feeble and fragile;
To think of even tread a while!
No calliper will make me stride!
Than your candid lovely smile! !
I expect that glitter of love!
More in life to live my life!
So as always you know well! !
That, I too need You in this life! ! !
Effectively brings out the emotions and pain of separtion...Good one Sandhya
touching write...successfully brought me into deep thoughts... on the feelings it conveyed to me... the pain...the loss..and the longing... love being expressed vividly.... 10++
So Beautifully written, Your emotions flow so nicely through your writings.
emotions flow freely from your heart and find a way in PH...........
we too need you here sandhya! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice poem loved it given 10
Well, punctuation problems and improper use of U for the word you aside, Sandhya, this is a fine poem. When have you ever read a poem in a book that had two or three or more exclamation marks after the last word in a line? And you will not see the word you as U in a book of poetry either. Once you overcome these problems, you have the talent to be a fine poet, for poetic feeling is in your words, not your U's or overabundant exclamation points. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good poem...brings out the turmoil inside mind boisterously well...10