Still Life Poem by Tom Billsborough

Still Life

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Journeys begin by unravelling waters,
By this jade pool where constant eddies sculpture
Crowns of white pearl, sparkling tiaras..
Absence in true form.

Sunday, June 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 08 September 2017

I have not come across this verse type as a modern form to be practiced creatively. In this meditative miniature, the fanciful shapes picked out by the eye dissolve at their moment of formation. Here beauty lies in spontaneous forms of Nature, but the mind reaches for meaning, sees them as vanishing treasures.

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Tom Billsborough 08 September 2017

I wrote about a hundred poems in the form of the Sapphic Stanza. but only five have survived. It is a notoriously difficult metre. The strict format can be found on the internet under Sapphic stanza I have all of Sappho's verse but only in English translation now. But this poem is only Sapphic in form. try the format if you like. I warn you, it is tough, but good training, I guess! .

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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