Venus's cloudy image
Filled the room with
Breath taking stillness.
Even the beams shouted
In their silence of
The gulf that existed.
Our love pregnantly
Profound, cold as any
Iceberg.
Embers of the day
Captivating the cold
Stillness of life.
Very deep and original poem. Can feel the heartbeat in the poem Excellent
O David, My dear poet, I love it. Really you are great creator, I wish you all goodness.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stillness haikus coherently delivered. Beautiful. Thank you.