Stillness Poem by SALINI NAIR

Stillness

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Lost all loved
Foundation of stillness

Lost all dreams
First pillar of stillness

Lost all support
Second pillar of stillness

Lost egoism
Third pillar of stillness

Lost temper
Fourth pillar of stillness

Vagueness
The roof of stillness

Sink in tears
Purified the self

There erect a wonderful self
Behold the courage crafted

There arises a brave human
Silently in some corner! ! ! ! !

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Saturday, August 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 August 2014

How to create a brave human being? Answered in the poem nicely.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Brave human is erected after purifying the inner self...Poem with in depth meaning.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 August 2014

Stillness found within self after discounting all the upright structures of stillness.......great thought

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Akhtar Jawad 02 August 2014

The qualities you mentioned in your lovely poem are the qualities of a great leader. we are common men and it will be too much for a common man. But I don't mean you are wrong, you are 100% correct. A nice write.

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