Stone Poem by shakil ahmed

Stone

Rating: 4.8


Stone

I love a piece of stone
To forget the feelings that I am alone
It's a different stone that doesn't melt
It's warmth can never be felt
It's a hard stone made of rock
After frequent persuasion, it doesn't talk
I try to melt the stone with drops of tears
In a state of untold panic and fears
Tears wash the stone - giving a message of love
But it doesn't change - even after frequent washing.
I am an obstinate with unending courage.
I won't surrender, though it is tough.
I will become a hammer, made of iron
And with a hard blow, I will break the stone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

Highly imaginative poem. Full of emotions too. Nice depiction of deepest love through a stone. Let it be quoted... I won't surrender, though it is tough. I will become a hammer, made of iron And with a hard blow, I will break the stone. Fantastic. Thanks for sharing.10/10

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 16 November 2014

So much love the world and may be a great positiveness it gives. A nice poem.

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shakil ahmed

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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