Everything breaks apart-
Fair or unfair,
A moment of confusion,
Maybe a step late,
And everything there was
Might get seized
And sure it will hurt.
All those daydreams,
All those lazy hours,
All the locks and hacks,
Check out at last,
And everything we built
Comes breaking apart.
I guess that's life-
That only we can be responsible,
Maybe only we can build it again,
And this time with care;
A sand castle falls down
Just a wave, all it takes;
So now a stone one maybe
We have to dream again.
YOU NEVER REPLY NOR THANK NOR READ OTHERS POEMS HENCE CHANCES OF SUCCESS ARE LIKE UR STONE CASTLES BROKEN O POET JUST THINK
Hope I will not be disappointing & thanks again for your well-thought comment. Happy reading.
I've been rather irregular on Poemhunter these last couple months. Going through a transitional state actually, both on my writing & social life.As for not reading other's poems here, I am focusing more on books & sorts rather than webbased activities.
Hello dear poet, I want to thank you first for taking your time to read my works & to say sorry for my being unresponsive. Though it gives me great pleasure knowing that someone is trying to understand my thoughts.
A sand castle falls down Just a wave, all it takes; So now a stone one maybe We have to dream again. keep it on
MY new found friend a fine poetic CREATION, . You may like to read my poem, MOM'S SMILES THANX IN ADVANCE DA.
nice- life is stable in ebb and tide in breaking and building the bank...//
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A refined poetic imagination, Dipro Azad. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.