Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Stop Doing What You Do - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

If you haven't done it,
How can you give advice?
To anyone to benefit.
If you haven't done it,
With opinions from you comin'.
If you haven't done it,
With it proven done.
Why are you opinionated,
Giving thoughts exaggerated.
Embellished to relish,
The attention that comes.

Stop.
Doing what you do alot.
To have other people believe...
Expertise you've got.
When you do not!
Stop.
Doing what you do alot.
To have other people believe...
Expertise you've got.
When you do not!

Doing what you do,
Is only proving what you're doing should stop!
So drop it as a topic others come to find to knock.
Doing what you do,
Is only proving what you're doing should stop!
So drop it as a topic others come to find to knock.

Stop.
Doing what you do alot.
To have other people believe...
Expertise you've got.
When you do not,
So stop.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Stop Doing What You Do by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/17/2015 1:36:00 AM)


    do what you do, good one, thanks.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2015


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