Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America
Wednesday, May 3, 2023

Stop For A Moment And Read This Poem (Final Version) Comments

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stop for a moment and read this poem.
let the greenery of it rustle in the wind
and there you are again can it be so:
that child you were a long time ago;
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Mary Angela Douglas
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Denis Mair 06 May 2023

To think of a poem having greenery that rustles or one's breath being like a metronome in search of music, this shows your poem has entered a realm of fluid transformations. The soul's movements are like a musical accompaniment to everyday things.

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Denis Mair 06 May 2023

The attendant angels of this poem led you to magical lines: ', , , Let the greenery of it rustle in the wind', , , 'Breath more like a metronome in search of music.'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 May 2023

breathe more like a metronome in search of music.....wonderful rendition!

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Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America
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