Stop-Motion Poem by Rob Knetsch

Stop-Motion

Rating: 5.0


the wheels
they have stopped
the gears have failed
no progress anymore
no motion

the gathering
of all the knowledge
collecting all the tools
calling on all the men
with the know-how

the experience
appears inadequate
insufficient for a solution
repair impossible
no fix

the future
should hold the answer
but with gears and wheels
not working, all is stranded
time's up

"stop-motion" © 2014 Rob Knetsch

Monday, February 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: broken,broken future,knowledge,time
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 05 February 2019

OF the 10's are still needed (by PH of course) , I send you here a myriad of 10's. Absolutely deserved, Rob!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 February 2019

Most rational poem, full of intelligence, but you have forgotten the women, IF you did not, then no need to.....the rest you know. I tell you frankly this is absolutely contained with all smartest tools. Thank you for sharing such intelligent and yet poetic words.

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