'Seeping Through Into The Bubble' Poem by Rob Knetsch

'Seeping Through Into The Bubble'

Rating: 4.5


all along
i was convinced
i always knew
at least i thought
that i knew, for sure
that this reality
my reality, in here
in my bubble
was real reality

but recently
it seems to me
i seem to become
aware of this other
this weird and ever
more horrible notion
that this, my reality
is not as real as it was
as it has been always

now the sense
is growing
the feeling
gets stronger
more and more
that it is like
a new reality is
seeping through
into my bubble

'seeping through into the Bubble' © Rob Knetsch 2013

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: abstract,surrealism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

The beauty of poetry is in the articulation, insight and penning. A well articulated poem, nicely encapsulated and insightfully written with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Rob. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Adeline Foster 27 October 2015

I take it, the poem is about sharing. Hope I got it right. Good poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 October 2015

''into my bubble'' everybody lives in his/her own bubble.. where reality is mostly a subjective one.. and partly 'virtual'.. thanks for sharing, Rob Blessings

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

I am not even sure how reality is or should be defined. Thanks for sharing, Rob

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John Richter 20 October 2015

I like the repetitive nature and simplicity of this. Good poem...

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