Stranded On A Lonely Island Poem by Rini Shibu

Stranded On A Lonely Island

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In fraction of seconds
The known becomes unknown
confused and unaware of the reason
Haven't been told or revealed
All of a sudden stranded on an island
The roaring waves and heavy wind
to console and accompany
You are queered and iced
Deserted and strangled by loneliness
Wish to be engulfed by the wave
Just to leave a sigh of emptiness

Sunday, November 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 12 November 2017

Great poem about being stranded on a lonely island. It would be better to have company if a person gets stranded.

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Rini. 12 November 2017

That would be great.. Thanks for the comment

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

In fraction of seconds The known becomes unknown..............just in fraction of a second!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

I loved this sensitive write. We not only see loneliness we feel it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 26 November 2017

A great poem on solitude and loneliness. Loved the last two lines, so artistic. I salute the great human being in you, Rini. 10++++++++ for such a lovely poem. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Subhas for your kind words

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Rajendra Rout 21 November 2017

Wow! ! What a beautiful poem Sharing.i enjoy this lovely poem 10+++++****

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Rini Shibu 21 November 2017

Thanks Rajendra..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2017

This little poem carries much depth with a very touching poetic expression.Excellent piece of Work is shared..10

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Rini Shibu 14 November 2017

Thanks Dillip, your words are encouraging

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