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Saturday, April 29, 2017

Garden Of Love

Rating: 4.7
Soul in the garden of love
It's like paradise on earth
Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet
Fresh energetic buds ready to burst
Waiting for the dawn to embrace the warmth of sun
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee
came  near and whispered to me
Am lost in your ardent aroma..
You are my life, you are my world..
Softly kissed and tickled  to bloom my heart..
Filled me with beauty and added colors to my life..
You sucked my nectar everyday..
Flew away I couldn't see..
Filled and stored all your hive..
You have stolen all my charm...
lost my elangance
Withered on the ground never you knew
this will be the end when you return..
Does love life give only wound?
Rini Shibu
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee came near and whispered to me Am lost in your ardent aroma.. You are my life, you are my world.. full of passion and love. tony
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Prabir Gayen 08 February 2020
Withered on the ground never you knew this will be the end when you return.. Does love life give only wound? ... .. charming poem
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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018
Such a heartfelt poem about love and loss. The ending of the poem is the highlight of the piece. Does love life give only wound? Brilliantly penned.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2018
So lovely poem, , , , , , right 10 No narrow path Thursday,6th September 2018 it has the capacity to make it flowery Love has no narrow path it makes you breathe, freely without the fear of death and keeps intact your commitment to the faith Hasmukh Amathaal Mehta
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Rebecca Navarre 29 August 2018
Ever such beautiful heart, with such beauty within, with such beautiful love, to share and to give! .. To love so true is such a beautiful thing, even when God ends up comforting! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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Tanzila Rehmat 24 July 2018
Such a beautiful poem dear Poet! Thanks for sharing this masterpiece with us
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Aj Anwar 09 July 2018
Beautifully written. And yes, we all come back to the last line, the question of 'wound', despite all the beauties in the garden. Love it!
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Robert Murray Smith 11 June 2018
I keep revisiting this beautiful poem....Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet....These beautiful lines are magnificent.
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Ramesh Rai 01 June 2018
Marvelous. Soul is the garden of love. Fabulous.10+++++
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Bill Cantrell 10 May 2018
This by far is your best poetry, you have done it in this poem! ! ! This should be poem of the day, rarely do I see a poem this well penned! !
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