Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
Cry for lost strength
When the limbs bow down
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A beautiful and powerful poem adorned with abounding and sparkling images and poetic expressions. Liked the recurring lines that add beauty to this well expressed and executed poetic gem.
Very nice, Rob. I would changed one word in the last line: 'their' instead of 'there'.
Sometimes revisiting one's own poetry is like a new discovery!