Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,455 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Strike At Will - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I am not helpless or destitute
Who shall dance to your flue?
I shall change whole scene
That might have never witnessed or seen

I shall triumph
With half
Of your participation
And half of mine

It is not simple matter
But for honor
We are women
But human too

Try to reason out
And talk loudly about
We are not weak creature
But confident of altering river water

Do not under estimate
Or try to relate
The way you like!
We shall strike at our will

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2015 6:59:00 PM)

    welcome Ramesh Rai, Sunil Algama, Shamenaz Shaikh
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2015 6:59:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome shyama roy n
    ثائر لطفي
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    no it is flute only for instumental voice (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2015 8:25:00 PM)

    Cindy Harrington Gunter likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta wwelcome
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  • Kim Barney (7/20/2015 7:37:00 PM)

    In the second line, did you mean FLUTE instead of FLUE?
    That would rhyme with destitute in line one, and also would make a lot more sense, at least to me.
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  • Kim Barney (7/20/2015 7:35:00 PM)

    Interesting poem and fascinating illustration. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2015 7:17:00 PM)

    The way you like!
    We shall strike at our will
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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 20, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 21, 2015


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