Asif Baloch

Freshman - 650 Points (06-06-1978 / karachi)

Strings Attached - Poem by Asif Baloch

We follow the same pace
Same path
Of father, grandfather
Forefathers been
Strings attached but
Cannot be seen

War, destruction
Whatever shown
We see
Planted hatred
So deep
Strings attached but
Cannot be seen

Slaves of desires
Followers of heart
Blinded climbing
Steep
Strings attached but
Cannot be seen

Alas! Balouch
Humans are slaves
Of human
Slavery runs in
Our veins
Pawns of manipulating
Game
Strings attached but
Cannot be seen

Asif Balouch
Copyright December 8,2015

Topic(s) of this poem: humanity, war and peace


Comments about Strings Attached by Asif Baloch

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/9/2015 6:28:00 AM)


    Slaves of desires! With the ways of life; but, we can surely change along the line. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Aijaz Asif (12/12/2015 11:46:00 AM)

    Thank you for like and such beautiful comment Edward Kofi Louis :)

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/9/2015 5:48:00 AM)


    This is what every powerful nation and its people think about others and why powerful, every one is after it and it is one of the major cause of conflict....Thought provoking poem.10 (Report) Reply

    Aijaz Asif (12/12/2015 11:49:00 AM)

    Indeed and thanks for such inspiring comment and like Mohammed Asim Nehal :)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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