Wednesday, July 13, 2016

Strong Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am stronger than the tornado
that destroyed my childhood home.
I am stronger than the seasons
that passed me on the road to nowhere.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 13 July 2016

I felt part of the cosmos that surrounds us, an eliment of the universe itself, a small unit of the eternity we live in.

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Barry Middleton 13 July 2016

Very good, that's what I was aiming for. Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 July 2016

A man's strength cannot be defeated. This poem reminds me of Hemingway's words, A man can be destroyed but not defeated. This poem is such an amazing reflection of inner power that it has left me speechless. A10

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Barry Middleton 13 July 2016

Near the end of a marathon, one will either collapse or find new strength. Thank you for the appreciative comment.

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