Strong Metal Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong Metal

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What ever your strong metal may be
Still you are not free
Criticism from friends and relatives
As they are critical and very subjective

You might excel in general way
Still some dejection may take you away
You may feel some deficiency
If you remain childless with lots of sufficiency

Life without kids is unimaginable
People may taunt you of being not capable
That may be insult hurled at you
You won’t be able to look trough

It is pinching you very deep
You can’t think more over it and weep
It is none of your fault
Still its impact is felt

You are not taken not lightly
Your fate is not expressed rightly
There may be some natural defect
Why people should think wrong and react?

Children are welcomed at right age and in time
They are taken as god’s gift and treated as such sometimes
They are creating environment very conducive to human mind
The child is link between all matters that is driving people blind

We are after all very sensitive to some of the insults
That is inherent and cowardly inbuilt
We can not come out of it even if tried
So many things are hidden and even lied

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We are after all very sensitive to some of the insults That is inherent and cowardly inbuilt We can not come out of it even if tried So many things are hidden and even lied

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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