Stupidity Poem by Elizabeth Fletcher

Stupidity

Rating: 5.0


'I know him', is what I thought.
My heart burns as if shot.
All he ever brought was pain,
But I would pray that he came
So I could see his face.
His scent I can almost taste.
My heart that once felt the fire of desire,
Now feels the heavy weight of sorrow.
I have a lust for him that is dire.
I lose all hope for a happy morrow.
Who is stupider? Him for asking this of me?
Or me. For complying and doing his evil deed?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 June 2011

Great poem with plenty of depth. Rich in imagery and style. I rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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