Stupidity Poem by Elizabeth Fletcher

Stupidity

Rating: 5.0


'I know him', is what I thought.
My heart burns as if shot.
All he ever brought was pain,
But I would pray that he came
So I could see his face.
His scent I can almost taste.
My heart that once felt the fire of desire,
Now feels the heavy weight of sorrow.
I have a lust for him that is dire.
I lose all hope for a happy morrow.
Who is stupider? Him for asking this of me?
Or me. For complying and doing his evil deed?

Friday, June 10, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: lust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 June 2011

Great poem with plenty of depth. Rich in imagery and style. I rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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