Success Poem by Shanike Sydoney Palmer

Success

Rating: 4.5


There is not a war bigger
Than the one about success and defeat.
Its a journey about walking in the rain
to subdue each pain, of chasing unknown limits-
To compete with none but ourselves.

We live and we learn
growing with wings that flutters on the
edge of experience.
Being visible, yet invisible
To will and it is done,
towards a desired destination.

I want to win this war, emerging as myself
For I am who I am, else I wouldnt want this success.
I wouldnt fathom the journey, my wounded heart wouldnt
know how to heal.
Success is my journey towards a grand destiny for
many races with time, echoing the notes of a dream.

Yet the walls around me are like ice-
and ice melts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shanike Sydoney Palmer 27 July 2015

Thank you all for your support and love, will continue to do my best.

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Lokis White 23 July 2015

Beautiful. I going send it to a friend or 2 to read. Keep it up.

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Chinedu Dike 16 July 2015

Indeed success is a journey in the rain that requires drive, perseverance, faith... It's a trip towards visualized dream, self actualization and grand destiny. A lovely piece of poetry elegantly penned with insight. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 09 July 2015

I enjoyed your poem, Shanike. Thanks for sharing

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