Nature is suckling milk to child sun,
Dawn is maternal aunty is nurturing,
Uncle sky is smiling more so far,
Weather is paternal aunty waiting.
To welcome newborn child in family,
All are eager in both sides of tree,
Mom's family is happy getting love,
Getting grandson daddy's family is in joy.
Such a lovable morning this is of luck!
Welcoming newborn of rosy red skin,
Gradually child sun will be bright,
Grandmother dusk is waiting to dandle.
Powerful universe is great teacher,
He will teach letters of love and laws,
Sun will grow and do job after passing,
After retirement sun will sleep at night.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,3 April 2017. All rights reserved
Such a lovable morning... Ah, morning is viewed as a new-born child, dusk a grandmother, and the like... nature motivates mankind. Lovely.
Lovable morning motivates mind. We feel wind. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.
suckling milk to child sun, Dawn is maternal aunty Uncle sky is smiling Welcoming newborn of rosy red skin, nature teaches letters of love and laws, i smiled and smiled and smiled reading ur poetic imagination.. i believe firmly that it is in simple expressions poetic sense and beauty remain. You have that great talent dear poet Kumaramani.. tony
Thank you very much for your encouraging feedback. This is highly appreciated.
True love and laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovable morning motivates mind. This poem is very nice and interesting one.