Such An Endevour Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Such An Endevour

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I have come across many more friends
Add daily more and more as known trend
That makes me to feel close
As friends I chose

It has paid dividend
I always bow head and bend
To their wishes
Even if they harshly criticize

My duty is to write
Put thoughts across and cite
Many illustrations to support
Go over it again and post

They have become like family
Many converse freely
Try to disclose even their personal problems
And seek advice how to come out of trouble

Whole of the day passes in evaluation
To read their comments and reaction
Besides composition of new poems
Post them all over in turn

I love to chat and converse
Thus cultural bond increases
I come to know about their back ground
New thoughts with reasons are found

I shall thrust more on such endeavor
It is purely an honor
To know more
About unknown people and come closer

Sunday, June 29, 2014
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Premilah Ramnauth The honour is shared Mr Poet Premilah Ramnauth's photo. 4 mins · Unlike · 1

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good Twylla Wakefield34 minutes ago enjoyable read

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Colleen Courtney 29 June 2014

This is such a wonderful poem Mehta! You've included in this write all of the things which make PoemHunter such an amazing site. I too have made many friends here and a few who I speak with daily. It is so beautiful to reach out to others and learn about their cultures and lives. And as you said, a great place to get feedback from others and offer our own encouragement and insights. Love this piece!

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I have come across many more friends Add daily more and more as known trend

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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