Sudden Realization - A Birthday Note. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sudden Realization - A Birthday Note.

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As each year passes by and I attempt to fulfil
all of my dreams and desires
deep inside, I realize the truth,
about the body given to me for use,
now whilst I am vulnerable and frail,
I realize, how tough it's far to satisfy all trail
I gradually accept the inevitable end.

Numerous bags to unpack,
numerous burdens to shed.
In my innocence, I amassed so much
believing them to be invaluable.
It is now time to discard them as worthless.

I perceive life as a never-ending cycle,
enlightenment comes after plenty of struggle.
By the time I begin to comprehend
I see my offspring are engrossed in the same grind,
although we all know it is difficult to learn from others
Therefore, those who are born
continue to repeat the same tasks and actions.

Wednesday, April 26, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life,birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 April 2023

Top marks for this very meaningful poem with profound wisdom. To my favourite as well

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 April 2023

So true Asim ji! I loved the second stanza very much. So many bags to unpack and so many burdens that we need to shed.....this fully applies to me as well and i am sure for many others too..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 April 2023

A poem that is stirring in its wisdom and truth. Thank you for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal 27 April 2023

Thanks much Evelyn.

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