Suggested Re-Write For A Poem By Valsa George Poem by WES Vogler

A woman ran into the balcony
Husband ran behind yelling... "Stop, Honey
Why are you so dumb?
Kindly do not jump
Our car's right below, think of the money."


On the balcony a woman appears
It is just as her poor husband fears
"Good heavens above...
If you must jump, my love,
Let me move the car first." (he's in tears)

(we are all in a learning process.
I am sure someone will in turn write what he/she considers an improvement to my re-write)