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Suiceide - Poem by DAVIDIA KARTINA

Suicide is like ICE
It cuts like a fice
It is not a vice
But an awful bice

Suicide is like FIRE
Not a person searching for HIRE
Dont dare call me a liar
Or you'll be a deny-er

Suicide is my SOUL
And like an innocent fowl
It eats the heart it stole
And so I say LOL

Comments about Suiceide by DAVIDIA KARTINA

  • (6/15/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    seriously? ? ? i no enough people have already bagged on you for this but come. you can do better then this. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/8/2008 9:51:00 PM)

    i think that you should be more serious when you write something like suiceide but if you are just messing around about it it kind of offends me that you would take something so serious and make it silly and funny (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2007 9:25:00 PM)

    WOW............ that is really goood.ur great. (Report) Reply

  • (6/7/2007 7:21:00 PM)

    Wow....that was good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 4, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, March 7, 2011

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