Spanning the bridge between life and death
Deciding to take a final breath
Barrel in mouth
Trigger in hand
Choosing to take your final stand
Lonely once more
My forever long bane
Without the comfort of her
How shall I stay sane
It spans the bridge between life and death
While we take our final breaths
I <3 it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You left me speachless once again
Exactly how i feel. You caught the emotion definately in this poem. I love it <3 **Tess c.**
So far just read this one poem and the Titles. Great potential. Love your titles. If you read only one poem (of mine) read 'One more kiss'.
Hey Tim, ---hope this is only a figment of your imagination and nothing serious. Na no one is worth that much---your life is more precious remember that. We are all here and love you. Anyways great write (but hope only a fiction) . Keep writing. ++++10 to you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a very beautiful but short and simple poem.i, at one point in my life, felt this way.w/ 1 small difference 2 this poem.4 me i was w/out the comfort of him.keep it up