Timothy Weiermann
Tucson, Arizona
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The Same Moon

Rating: 4.9
The sweet sun fading over the silent horizon,
The same moon slowly showing to them each

The secrecy was gone, and the light began to fade
Sliding over us, beyond the others reach,

Quietly rising, through air thick with silent melodies
Full moonlight, only able to please

Suffering the insomnia, the sleepless night
Staring only at the stolen light

On two sides of the world, both can see
The fluid poetry that moves the sea

The luminous orb, floating in air
From both places, they see the other there

Together, separate, single apart
They have but a single heart
Emo Seb 21 August 2008
bueno. this is very well written.
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DELETED NOW 21 August 2008
I like how u used the words it's very discriptive I love watching the moon...
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Tanny Quin 12 August 2008
Excellent writing and very descriptive, truly gifted. Keep writing! ! Phebe
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Stacey Watts 11 August 2008
Truly a masterpiece. Your writing shows maturity. I like this poem.
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Keith Foley 10 August 2008
I'm delighted to read all your poetry and will. Nice work can't hardly believe your only 15. Your ahead of yourself in writing, a real talent.
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You said that the moon was the poetry that moved the sea. Your poetry is the song that moves the heart. Very beautiful.
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Amber Lamb 08 August 2008
This is very nice, I especially like the last four stanza's, keep up the good work!
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Dawn Slanker 07 August 2008
Very nice. I like the whole poem, but that last couplet could stand as a poem on it's own. Lovely verse.
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Serenity Prayer 07 August 2008
wonderful job! ! keep up the good work.
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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008
'Together, separate, single apart They have but a single heart A beautiful climax! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +10 to you lil fren regards anju
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