Timothy Weiermann

Rookie (Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

The Same Moon - Poem by Timothy Weiermann

The sweet sun fading over the silent horizon,
The same moon slowly showing to them each

The secrecy was gone, and the light began to fade
Sliding over us, beyond the others reach,

Quietly rising, through air thick with silent melodies
Full moonlight, only able to please

Suffering the insomnia, the sleepless night
Staring only at the stolen light

On two sides of the world, both can see
The fluid poetry that moves the sea

The luminous orb, floating in air
From both places, they see the other there

Together, separate, single apart
They have but a single heart


Comments about The Same Moon by Timothy Weiermann

  • (8/21/2008 12:32:00 PM)

    bueno. this is very well written. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    I like how u used the words
    it's very discriptive
    I love watching the moon...
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  • (8/12/2008 11:32:00 AM)

    Excellent writing and very descriptive, truly gifted. Keep writing! ! Phebe (Report)Reply

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  • (8/11/2008 12:59:00 PM)

    Truly a masterpiece. Your writing shows maturity. I like this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/10/2008 12:29:00 AM)

    I'm delighted to read all your poetry and will. Nice work can't hardly believe your only 15. Your ahead of yourself in writing, a real talent. (Report)Reply

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  • everything has a name but me (8/9/2008 12:10:00 PM)

    You said that the moon was the poetry that moved the sea. Your poetry is the song that moves the heart. Very beautiful. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2008 11:35:00 AM)

    This is very nice, I especially like the last four stanza's, keep up the good work! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2008 1:12:00 PM)

    Very nice. I like the whole poem, but that last couplet could stand as a poem on it's own. Lovely verse. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2008 12:06:00 PM)

    wonderful job! ! keep up the good work. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2008 8:43:00 PM)

    'Together, separate, single apart
    They have but a single heart

    A beautiful climax! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +10 to you lil fren

    regards anju
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 31, 2011


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