Gary McPhail

Rookie (01-09-89 / Chesterfield)

Suicide - Poem by Gary McPhail

Hang me from my sins,
Drown me in my guilt,
Swimming in a pool of blood,
From this pain I have built.

I’m caught in a trap,
A trap I cannot escape,
Its time for me to give up,
And give in to my pain.

I try to hide away,
I live alone at night,
I never want to be afraid,
of this world of life.

There eyes look at me,
They hate me so much,
No matter how hard I try,
I’ll always give up.


Comments about Suicide by Gary McPhail

  • (5/10/2018 9:35:00 AM)

    This is a really good poem. It shows how some people feel in real life. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2018 7:25:00 PM)

    Their eyes* Not “there eyes“ (Report)Reply

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  • (11/12/2006 10:30:00 AM)

    i know what you're feeling, if it is what you're writing. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 17, 2006


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