Suicide Poem by Gary McPhail

Suicide

Rating: 3.1


Hang me from my sins,
Drown me in my guilt,
Swimming in a pool of blood,
From this pain I have built.

I’m caught in a trap,
A trap I cannot escape,
Its time for me to give up,
And give in to my pain.

I try to hide away,
I live alone at night,
I never want to be afraid,
of this world of life.

There eyes look at me,
They hate me so much,
No matter how hard I try,
I’ll always give up.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
joya kjhn 03 January 2020

thats what i feel everyday. trust ur right in half of everything

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Richard 10 May 2018

This is a really good poem. It shows how some people feel in real life.

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Reemen 23 January 2018

Their eyes* Not “there eyes“

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Tahnee ? ? ? 12 November 2006

i know what you're feeling, if it is what you're writing.

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