Lizzie Resendiz

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Suicide - Poem by Lizzie Resendiz

It's all i think about
Can't get it out
So hard to resist
resist the urge to slit my wrist
wishing i had a gun
all i have is a small razor
so i drag the blade across my legs and arms
wishing to do myself much more harm
and i wake soaked in blood
cuts all over my body
and im still somehow alive
deep and long so much blood lost
how am i still here?
I really need a gun
one day... one day

Comments about Suicide by Lizzie Resendiz

  • (4/17/2013 12:40:00 PM)

    i know where you have been. ive went there before (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
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  • (12/28/2011 1:14:00 PM)

    i agree wit yhu..i think suicide sometimes but i have someone to tlk to but i dnt tlk to them...but yhur poem is perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/31/2010 12:21:00 AM)

    awesome poem i give it a 10
    the way its written is really good
    hope you check out my witings on here
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2010 8:45:00 PM)

    i agree with you
    suicide i tried 5 times
    so it's easy for me T_T
    (Report) Reply

  • Amy Marie (2/3/2010 8:03:00 PM)

    I can relate sometimes ;) (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    I can truely relate I have tryed to end it by cutting but it failed it's like you wrote that poem about me freE writing keep it up can't wait to read more (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    Wow...that's so harsh. I hope ur still alive to write more poems LOL! That was beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    i get the message,
    alot of people can relate to that poem,
    love the way its written,
    god job,

    but suicide is not the way,
    no offence
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    one day... one day is all defeatist views butmany withdraw afrom race forthefear of rage or reprisals..... good write....10
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    i like it. anybody's that has felt like this can really relate to you (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2009 5:31:00 AM)

    you know something suicide is never the answer to anything it actually makes you feel a whole lot worse (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2009 11:12:00 PM)

    Omg i like your poems. Really nice.....
    Read mine Im new at this poetry thingy..
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2009 7:00:00 PM)

    I really like this. It says so much in so little. Really deep. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009

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