Suicide
It's all i think about
Suicide
Can't get it out
Suicide
So hard to resist
Suicide
resist the urge to slit my wrist
Suicide
wishing i had a gun
Suicide
all i have is a small razor
Suicide
so i drag the blade across my legs and arms
Suicide
wishing to do myself much more harm
Suicide
and i wake soaked in blood
Suicide
cuts all over my body
Suicide
and im still somehow alive
Suicide
deep and long so much blood lost
Suicide
how am i still here?
Suicide
I really need a gun
Suicide
one day... one day
Suicide
i get the message, alot of people can relate to that poem, love the way its written, god job, but suicide is not the way, no offence
you know something suicide is never the answer to anything it actually makes you feel a whole lot worse
one day... one day Suicide......it is all defeatist views butmany withdraw afrom race forthefear of rage or reprisals..... good write....10
i like it. anybody's that has felt like this can really relate to you
i agree wit yhu..i think suicide sometimes but i have someone to tlk to but i dnt tlk to them...but yhur poem is perfect 10
awesome poem i give it a 10 the way its written is really good hope you check out my witings on here
i agree with you suicide i tried 5 times so it's easy for me T_T
I can truely relate I have tryed to end it by cutting but it failed it's like you wrote that poem about me freE writing keep it up can't wait to read more
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow...that's so harsh. I hope ur still alive to write more poems LOL! That was beautiful.