Suicide is on my mind all the time
how can I get rid of of it
no one can help me now not even god
Im unsaveable
I can see the end of my road
will i die plz help me decide
nothin helps, the coke the drinking the pills it just makes
things worst
Im stuck between realtiy and fansaty
fading in and out all the time
not knowing who to trust and wat the true behind the lie
reading and re-reading suicide poems
the reach say ppl who treat to commictt suicide end up doing it
and to ask myself who would cry I bet no one cuz
I love no one cuz no one loves me
well my family would cuz there family they have to
unless the hate me to
I would leave and note to say goodbye and to say
now did I open ur eyes
Its good, but i would hate to think that you really are drinking and doing drugs...that is self destructive and suicidal! I gave you a ten. Please tell me, that it is just a poem, and not about you! Concerned for you, Ms. Staples. Theo
wat i think of it i like it alot it is a really good poem no one say its not im still thinking if i want to put my poems on here now idk if there as good as ur poem
plz do not commit suicide cuz (boy oh boy is harley gonna kill me for this) because i love u and u hlped me once so i'm gonna help u whenever u need it jus plz tell me if u have any problems
this is a good poem... i'm not like others.. i think you need to clean up dry out.. and really think.. and do what you feel is right for you... no matter what your choice is
An interesting topic to write about, and how it was written to, kinda have to agree with the person below, stupid to drink and do coke, if you are looking to escape, maybe you should start off searching your soul and asking why, before going down the road of self destruction, i know cos have been down that road, i know where it leads, and ends...and so do you. my best..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your friend was rite about your poem. It's really good: -) . Keep writing your really good at it.