Burn In Hell, Daddy, Burn In Hell Poem by Jazmine Staples

Burn In Hell, Daddy, Burn In Hell

Rating: 5.0


first Im gonna tide him up in his sleep
then Im gonna dragging him to an old house
then I gonna toilette him
make him feel the pain that he made
me feel but twice as bad show him
how much I reallly cry myself to sleep
and hope the next day will be better
then Im gonna shot him and then cut him
up in little pieces and cook him and feed him
to some animal and watch them enjoy it
then wat little heart he has I gonna ripped it apart
cut it up in little piece and stomp on it just like he
did mine then I gonna burn it hoping he burns in
hell for eternity this is my rape of anger I builded up over time
very time he hurt me Ive holded back but one day
Im probably will explode and cant hold back any more
and they r really gonna see my pain mow that there in
helll and all I want to say is burn in hell, daddy, burn in hell
for eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ying Escalona 05 September 2007

this one is really burning..writing it here, i believe reduced the tension within..let it erupt here only dear...but remember..dont let your hand stained with blood..time changes everything

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Sasha Anonymous 05 September 2007

WOW thats a whole lot of hate i hope your father isn't realy that bad and that this is just a poem but it was good

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Jemarie Ragudo 26 November 2007

You probably heard this, but let me say it again. Love your enemies. Vengeance is not ours, it's God's. I don't know what you went through and I can only guess. I'm very sorry. But, hatred will not improve your plight. Forgiveness would be good for your health and spirit.

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wow, i like it, i like it alot, nt only cos i can relate to it but becos i know how you feel... don't do any of that though, cos after yu will pay the price and i don't want to see ur pretty face in jail... get him another way lol, i will brain storm with you anyday for that... awesome write tho babes Kaila -xXx-

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Sim Dan 11 November 2007

that was more rage than sylvia plath could muster - feel awfully bad for you - hope things will take a better turn

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 06 September 2007

I love strong poems like this. Maybe instead of just allowing yourself to expload you should show him the poem so he can see exactly what he; 's done wrong. Great work on the poem though, It was real strong and emotional. Keep writing.

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Flame6203E . 06 September 2007

wow i'm sorry u feel that way

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