Summer Is Almost Here Comments

Oh! I like so much this verse: 'You will cross many roads Some narrow and some wide Do not cross them in a hurry You could stumble, you could fall Now that you know how to walk You would soon wanna fly away But never forget the day When you took your first step on me' ...as for my opinion about all poem I think sometimes 'less is more' by such long naration is enough hard to attain 'read all poem on one breath' on this poem I have to deeply breathed few times....it´s only my humble opinion, coz I´m sooner poem´s consumer as poem-writer :) Have a great day!